Poetic Day 8: Words in Cement
Poetic Day 8 of National Poetry Month: April 8, 2019, Monday
For this second week of National Poetry Month, I have my “poem-poems” (poetic pom-poms) in hand and am cheerleading for poets and poetry readers! Enjoy the sharing of writing and reading poetry during this second week of April!
Words in Cement
poem by Alice Jane-Marie Massa
The poet thought
having a poem
engraved into the cement
of the marbleized monument
was even better than a book.
One misty day,
sitting on the bench,
across from the monument,
the poet realized
that a dash would have been better
at the end of line three,
that the “the”
could have been deleted,
that “wistful” would have been better
than “wishful,”
that ….
“Why did I agree to those words in cement?”
the poet asked aloud.
“I should have written the words
in sand,
with feathers,
or in foam.”
Realizing the words on the monument
could not be changed,
the poet headed toward home.
However, before leaving
the town square
and his writer’s block,
the poet stopped by the license branch
to renew his poetic license.
On the license, the clerk typed:
“Not valid in cement.”
PROMPTS FOR DAY 8 OF NATIONAL POETRY MONTH
- Write one or two quatrains which you would like on a monument.
- Write a poem which mentions or focuses on poetic license.
- Write a poem about an actual poet or a fictionalized poet.
- Write a poem which has a perspective from a park bench.
- Write a poem about “March Madness”–basketball or brackets.
May this second week of National Poetry Month be even more creative than Week 1 of NPM!
Alice and Leader Dog Willow
April 8, 2019, Monday
Thanks for reading this piece and honoring its copyright.
Oh, Alice,
How true this is! Each time I reread a piece of my writing I discover the need to revise and edit! It is one of the reasons that I have always disliked typing my own work as I am constantly changing what I originally thought was just right, poetry or prose. You captured the idea perfectly.
I hope that you and Willow had as beautiful a day as we had here in Monroe; our first real taste of spring!
Fondly,
Fran
Hi, Fran–Many thanks for your comments and perspectives on writing! So very much of writing is revising and editing–always polishing.
Oh, yes, our high temperature was an unbelievable 71 today. For the first time this spring, I did not wear gloves! Of course, a little snow is predicted for the end of the week.
Take care–Alice and Willow