Poem: Evidence of Emotion
Evidence of Emotion
by Alice Jane-Marie Massa
In the courtroom of the heart,
I offer you Exhibit A–
clear lenses of glasses
stained with teardrops.
Washing these unnecessarily prescription lenses
on this nearly frosted morning,
I think of the evidence of emotion,
the tear stains,
disappearing beneath
a cascade of water
and the touch of my finger.
Is the sadness of yesterday
now erased, forgotten,
evaluated, or forestalled?
Back in the courtroom of the heart,
an unqualified judge asked,
“Why do you wear these glasses
if you have no vision?”
My testimony began:
“Since I was seven,
I have been wearing glasses:
they seem as much a part of me
as my right hand
and my left leg,
as the clothes
I don each day.
Exhibit A has protected me
from hurt
or from greater injury
when I fell off my bike,
when a door was accidentally slung into my face,
when I encountered a piece of construction equipment
on the Kilbourn Drawbridge.
Wearing these glasses
calms my concerns
about being poked
by a low-hanging branch.
Through so many seasons of walking,
these glasses have shielded my broken eyes
from raindrops, snowflakes,
stinging sleet, and drying winds.
Believe me, I do not wear them for vanity:
I let my congenitally impaired vanity
dissolve decades ago.
Most of all,
I wear these glasses
to catch the tears
of emotions
so that I have proof
that I did not squelch
nor hide
all that I felt
on any yesterday.
I will admit
that I am not
an amateur holder of emotions:
I ascend from Italian descent;
I am
a professional holder of emotions–
a poet
who translates
tear stains
into the adversities of verse,
the joy of enjambment,
and the strides of stanzas.”
Midst the murmurs
magnifying in the courtroom,
the judge,
with unknown poetic license,
tapped his gavel and bellowed,
“Poetic order in the court!”
NOTE: Written on October 14, 2016, the above poem was my submission for my small-group critique session last evening. After hearing positive comments about this poem yesterday, I decided to share the poem on my Wordwalk blog today and postpone the family history piece about Lanzone’s Grocery Store to November, when each of my blog posts will focus on “Thanks” from an altitude of gratitude. Please continue to visit my Wordwalk blog throughout the upcoming month of thanks.
Happy Halloween!
Alice and Willow
October 26, 2016, Wednesday
Dear Alice. I don’t really know how to respond to this post. You are the wordsmith from west of the lakes. You have risen higher than a newly born October snowflake. I bow down to your beautiful ballet of pulsating poetic phrase. Amazing! Simply amazing! dp
Deon–Wow! A thousand thanks for your too generous and beautifully written comment!
Thanks for being so encouraging–Alice
Alice–Another beautiful post! Although I am not a qualified judge of poetry, I can understand why the critique group’s comments were positive, and I am sure your Italian ancestors are smiling from above as you share your stored emotions via these touching poems.–Sue
Sue–Thanks for your sweet comment. The thought of ancestors’ smiling upon me warms my heart.
Happy Halloween! Alice and Willow
Hi Alice,
I love this poem.
Hi, Mary-Jo–Thanks for your comment. Congratulations to you, editor, for your recently posted issue of the online, literary publication MAGNETS AND LADDERS! I always look forward to reading this creative and interesting online publication at:
http://www.magnetsandladders.org
and hope that many of my WORDWALK readers will check out the above link.
With appreciation for all that you do–Alice
Dear Alice,
This gorgeous group of words brought tears to my stoic Italian eyes! Wow, wow, wow!
Love, Fran
Fran–While a poet strives to evoke emotions, I did not expect tears. Thanks for sharing your reaction to my poem.
Best always–Alice
Poetic order in the court of life…you were born to write, and to see life with more than your eyes, Alice. Thanks for sharing this.
Paula–Many thanks for your special comment!
Happy November! Alice
This poem brings much emotion from those who love and respect you, Alice! You are blessed with many gifts and talents, which you generously share with everyone! God bless!
Carole–Thanks for your kind and flattering words. Blessings to you, Tim, and Jason, too.
(Willow says that I should not forget Bebe!)
Talk with you soon–A & W